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Stepheny 100WC

6.30 in the morning in the ice cold snow we were still walking and I found a baby polar bear. As it shivered they picked it up, well my friends did. They gave it to me and we walked home. We needed to find his mother. We found her asleep in a cave so we put the polar bear down beside her that quietly there was no sound. We walked home and it was time for bed. It was a good day today. So see you tomorrow with another adventure bye-bye.

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Comments on: "Stepheny 100WC" (2)

  1. Mrs Stones (Team 100WC) said:

    Hi Stepheny.

    Thank you for entering the 100 Word Challenge this week. You’ve chosen your setting carefully which fits really well with the prompt that you had to use. I’m really glad you were able to find the baby polar bear’s mother!

    Well done!
    Mrs Stones – Bradford, U.K.
    http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/

  2. Mrs McG (Team 100WC) said:

    Hello Stepheny,

    Thank you for your entry into the 100WC this week. What a lucky little polar bear, having you and your friends save it! You were very brave going into the cave where the mother polar bear was sleeping. To make your writing even better, you could try to think of a more interesting ending to your story. Maybe something to make the reader think about your writing a little bit more (What will happen to the bear now? or I wonder what adventures I’ll get up to tomorrow for instance)

    Keep up the great work,

    Mrs McG (Team 100WC)
    Derbyshire, England

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